The melodies sound insanley great, well done! The only downside for me is the drums, they sound a bit weak. Also too bad the song is so short.
I don't know if you're the original composer of this tune, but it slaps.
Keep up the good work mate,
~ Ahurac
Yeah. I was like panning every instrument to left or right and just put the drums in the middle. And yeah... It's short because I supposed to cope anime op style which is short and epic.
I will keep up my good work.
~ Fury (the original composer)
The drums are a bit loud. The notes are kinda random. Woooow that's a lot of kicks o_O. Although this can be improved, I don't think everything is bad. How long have you been making music?
Keep it up lad,
~ Ahurac
Recently, I started making music.
The lead is loud but that's an amazing tune, congrats to you both!
The drums beat is clearly something else, I actually never heard something similar. For me the only problem is the sound design, but this tune has really something.
If you wanna take new directions, I'll always support you, never stop making music and most importantly have fun!
~ Ahurac
I admit Im a bit of a weirdo on the sound design, specially on the dubtep sounds (but that's just cause I don't really master the art of dubstep sound design)
About the drums beat, I tried to follow your advice on using different drums and layers, and Im happy with how it turned out, so big thanks to you there <3
And yes, I am kind of in a new direction, where I want my music to reach a more emotional level, more than just sounding cool or nice (somthing like Illenium or Porter Robinson can do, but with my own way of making music)
Love your support :) Lovely regards,
Outer Kosmos
Yooo this chiptune melody is damn cool! I'd just say the dubstep samples under are a bit too violent to go with it, I would have added at least some strong bass to make them work with something. The speech is a bit loud but very well integrated in context. The sound design is a bit too harsh I'd say, plus it's a little bit too stereo. Sad the song is so short btw. I'm saying it again but I really like the work on the melodies, they are very cool.
I hope this short criticism helped! Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Hey, thank you. I felt like I didnt want to give it a strong bass to the song, somehow I wanted it to feel less compact. Also, I am trying to improve my dubstep sound desing skills (my sounds are not even close to be dope, but I will try my best with every song I make >:)
Thank you for the critics and the compliments, I love that people like my music ^^
Best regards,
Outer Kosmos <3
The samples and the pattern are really random, consider putting in order to make your track coherent.
~ Ahurac
Pretty scummy to rank it half a star for something that was intentional
A bit random but ok. It definitely lacks of more instruments and a proper structure. Don't hesitate to practice and experiment with stuff on your DAW.
~ Ahurac
thanks, this was a small song that i made for no reason
Yooo nice chiptune! The melody is catchy. I would definitely add a bass, otherwise the track feels a bit empty. Also the drums are a bit loud.
Keep it up!
~ Ahurac
The arp in the beginning is actually pretty interesting. A sort of bass comes in and creates a massive rumble, probably because of a hard limiter that destroys the master. I wouldn't recommend using a that messy bass. Also make sure the final exports of your tunes are louder so it doesn't have a massive volume difference with other tracks out there (this is probably because of the limiter).
Keep it up!
~ Ahurac
Thanks, next song will be better and longer
Spooky :0. When the bass came I felt that yo. The tune is cool but the bass (especially the sub) is a little bit too high and loud for me. Also it has a very high-pitched frequency that sounds a bit lonely. Sad the tune isn't a littlbe longer but that's perfectly fine.
Wish you the best!
~ Ahurac
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it when someone takes the time to give a few pointers for production, as those comments are getting rarer and rarer lol. Yeah, I agree that the noise/high freq burst could have been worked on more, I had plans to evolve that later in the song, but I completely forgot :/
thx,
//systemic
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