Please don't use FL stock samples, they sound really bad. The melody is pretty cool. it lacks or elements and wetness. Also sidechain your elements for a better sound. Don't ignore usage of bass, it's crucial. Avoid gaps like the one at 4:03, it breaks the rhythm of the song.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
The drop feels a little bit empty and the bass does not fit really well to the song imo. Also the song lacks of structure. Otherwise, the mix and the melody are pretty great to me.
Keep it up, also I scouted you to the audio portal so you'll get more visibility on Newgrounds,
~ Ahurac
Try to use different instruments for you bass and leads, because otherwise it creates weird waveform blending. The melody is good, it makes me think about Pokémon a lot. The master is over compressed.
thanks for the advice, i'll try to take it into account for future songs
The snare slaps af, not fan of the kick tho. It has some mixing problems and more sound design on the bass and lead would be cool. What DAW did you used to make the song?
~ Ahurac
I used this sparsely populated DAW named Caustic 3. BTW forgot to mix before releasing.
The instruments are offsync, it sounds like it's played in real time by a human but not in a proper way. Also it lacks of more instruments and the melody sounds random.
Good luck in the future,
~ Ahurac
It was played by a human
I also should try and not make it sound random
thanks for commenting!
also im new to making music
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