It lacks of some lows in the drums, it feels like a compressor is pulling out the highs. I must say I'm impressed by the quality of the composition and of the recording, that a very enjoyable audio. Maybe the melodic instruments at 0:44 are a bit too loud (not the guitar but the orchestral elements).
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Maybe!, thank you so much!
Wow, cool story. And even cooler audio, just sad the vocal is fully panned to the left, panning is cool but when it's extreme like that it creates a weird feeling. The drums groove is nice but I would have used different samples. The melodies are very cool.
Just realized I already know you from some movies you did on Newgrounds :0, also congrats for being an OG YouTuber, 2006 damn...
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Underrated. This melody is pretty cool. I checked some of your other audios and I think you should normalize the sound so it's louder and listeners aren't forced to turn up their volume to listen to the song. Some variation would be cool. Why not adding some chill drums in your next songs?
Keep it up really, best thing I heard today,
~ Ahurac
k thanks :D
Actually not that bad. I recommend you to use better sample libraries to make your brasses, Spitfire LABS got some good ones to get a professional sound. The groove and arragement are really nice. Why not turning this into a full song?
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
thanks. im relatively new to making anything, really. criticism like this will help me progress as an "artist(?)". Not turning it into a full song cause it's just something I did on the side as a small project.
Did you make this audio yourself? If yes is pretty cool. The mixing could be a bit better, like the "voices" are a bit loud compared to the drums. However the melodies are nice.
~ Ahurac
The beat is cool but the drums samples are a bit cheap. This feels really industrial which is pretty cool but the next thing you have to improve is to use better samples imo. You can also try to make a full song, that would be sick.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Nice melody, relaxing. The bass is cool too but it has some harmonics that can be stereo to make it wider. The drums are fire. If these are not just loops you threw like that then well done, it's really well made. The mix is pretty clean, I don't have anything else to say.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
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