Ahurac's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dango Daikazoku - by Jun Maeda (From Clannad Soundtrack) [Zedrick Lofi Remix]]

I don't get exactly what is your part in the creation of this audio, but I'll let a review anyway.
I don't really like the snare and imo it could have been more wet, like some other elements as the melody. Except that the interpretation is pretty good. It lacks of a sidechain and a quiet but present bass for me.
Keep it up,

~ Ahurac

DjZedrick responds:

I did everything except the melody 😅

[blissful]

The autopan is pretty hard, I advise you to go for a less violent one. The drums are okay but pretty bad audio quality, try to get better samples. The drums are very loud and the track pretty empty but that's my opinion.
Never give up on music, keep it up,

~ Ahurac

fireydestroyer responds:

i was kinda trying to go for a more old school, lofi feel, but i can see what you mean. as for the autopan, i tried to fix how janky it sounded but i couldnt. :(
thanks for the feedback though
- firey

[Aftermath]

Beatiful. Make sure to compress a little bit your piano and crank up the global volume to avoid volume difference. But I'd say that's okay for this audio since in this genre, volume = tension so it's accurate.
Excellent audio,

~ Ahurac

GlowBoyMusic responds:

Thank you for the suggestion! I will take note! I am glad you like my music! I have more in the works (I have abouuut...6 project files open on my Mac!) so stay tuned!

—Glow

[Guitar Thingy I]

The autopan is really hard. The guitar sounds good, a little bit too saturated but fine. The chords are pretty generic but that's okay. Why not turning this into a full song?

~ Ahurac

[musique pour bOwOnnie :D (pas finis)]

La basse est un peu cheap, genre elle manque de texture imo. J'adore la square lead avec du glide. Je crois reconnaître un clap stock de FL, je te conseille de le changer pour un autre sample, les claps de FL sonnent pas très bien. La partie à 00:49 avec la lead est grave cool mais tu devrais revoir quelques notes parce que j'ai l'impression que certaines sont fausse.
Good job, continue comme ça

~ Ahurac

MokoTems responds:

alors la basse j'ai pas réussi a mettre plus de texture (mais elle est un peu mieux qu'avant).
pour les claps il sont par défaut sur mon logiciel (LMMS) ils s'appelle clap1 clap2,3,4,5... donc je sais pas si c les même. et aussi, je sais pas si c'est un genre musicale mais j'ai mis aucun kick .___.
M E R C I (et la musique c pour du FNF)
c génial je améliore vite <:

[Triize-Requiem (WIP)]

The instruments sound cool. However some notes are pretty random speaking of tone. The bass shot at 00:19 is pretty random too. The textures are very psychedelic, I guess that's intended.
Nice work you got there, but now try to focus on mixing, music theory and maybe structure.

~ Ahurac

Triangelo responds:

I have to study a lot of music theory.

[Cursed Tape part2]

The percussions sound pretty good, but it's kinda repetitive at some point. For the mixing, that's well made, congrats. For the structure it's pretty random but let's call it progressive, that's often the way it works X). The fade out at the end :/ it's fine if you like it but there's a ton of ways to finish a song so if you want you can get creative with this.
Keep it up,

~ Ahurac

[Outer Kosmos - Love Is Love]

The vocal sound good but everything is loud compared to it. The House beat is nice, the vocal fits well to the vibe that wobble chords playing along clashes with it, you should have done some EQing to avoid this. That still sounds good tho. The drop sounds really good too, it's really full and nice to hear, well done for that.
You keep improving and that's perfect, keep it up,

~ Ahurac

OuterKosmos responds:

Thanks :) I just like the vocals not to stand too much up in the mix, but maybe I overdid a bit there, yeah. And the chords sound yeah, maybe I should have EQed a bit, but I tryed to make it fit without EQ by arranging it in a way that it sounds loud whenever the vocals finish sentences and so on.

PS: Ty for the drop review, I was breaking my mind in order to figure out how to make it sound full/powefull enough (I had to layer a lot)

Best regards,
Outer Kosmos

[Robotic Noise-TRZB4S$]

[COMMENT ON THE ORIGINAL SONG]
Some stuff are offbeat. The whole song sounds pretty dry. It globally lacks of bass imo. Also everything is pretty random.

[COMMENT ON THE NEW SONG, "Robotic Noise"]
This still sounds a bit random, the bass, the pads and the bells aren't playing harmonized notes and I don't think this is intentional. I really don't know how I am supposed to give feedback on this, there's just too much going on.

~ Ahurac

[Deep Space]

Relaxing. I'm not a big fan of ambient stuff like this but I have to admit that it's well executed.
Keep it up,

~ Ahurac

Jabun responds:

Thanks for listening and happy you enjoyed it! More to come soon :)