Pretty cool. Sad the bass is a little bit quiet, you should have sidechained the whole thing so it could have got more pumping.
Great piece of music, gg,
~ Ahurac
Pretty cool. Sad the bass is a little bit quiet, you should have sidechained the whole thing so it could have got more pumping.
Great piece of music, gg,
~ Ahurac
Thank you for the review! I'll try being more bold with the sidechain in the future!
The kick is pretty weak. It lacks of sidechain. The instruments are really cute and it has a nice vibe. It would fit really well in a platformer game or sth like that. Be careful when the piano hits after the first drop, it's a little bit out of context, I was like "okay, why tf is a piano hitting rn XD".
Keep it up man :),
~ Ahurac
This is two years late, but thanks for being the one who could actually tell me how to improve my music! I've since dropped the idea of composing music with my free time and instead picked up programming, but I'm happy to know my music wasn't completely terrible.
Thanks for helpin' out!
~ Everest212
Why can we barely hear the song?
Why is there a super loud riser and after nothing more? Why is nothing synced? Ah ok I understood, the song is disturbant XD ok why not but I would not listen to this everyday o_O
~ Ahurac
Seems like you're right to select Jazz as the genre because it is. Composition is... jazzy. But it's cool. The drums are really good but not loud enough when the piano plays. The strings are a little bit loud. GarageBand is good to start, but it's limited so if music is important for you, try to get a DAW for your PC or Mac, you can ask me for advice in DMs if you want :).
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
It lacks of some elements all accross the song, also weird effects like overused gate and DJ loop are too much present. With what software did you do this?
~ Ahurac
The melody is cool. The crash at 0:05 is not necessary imo. The kick is pretty weak. It lacks of sidechain, the effect which ducks the volume when the kick hits. It lacks of more elements. There's a weird gap at 0:58.
~ Ahurac
Didn’t know about sidechain before your response. Thanks.
The main perc is not really enjoyable to listen, it has a not really cool frequency. Despite some mixing problems the drums groove hard.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
What is the name of the song?
it is called the fire
The voice is not loud enough, we cannot really hear what it says. Melody is pretty nice. Hats are a little bit techno-sounding, not really dubstep. it lacks of sidechain of your instruments and OTT on your chords. Sad the song is not longer.
~ Ahurac
Thanx, man, for review!
Lost Bits is out now!
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