The melody is cool. The crash at 0:05 is not necessary imo. The kick is pretty weak. It lacks of sidechain, the effect which ducks the volume when the kick hits. It lacks of more elements. There's a weird gap at 0:58.
~ Ahurac
The melody is cool. The crash at 0:05 is not necessary imo. The kick is pretty weak. It lacks of sidechain, the effect which ducks the volume when the kick hits. It lacks of more elements. There's a weird gap at 0:58.
~ Ahurac
Didn’t know about sidechain before your response. Thanks.
The main perc is not really enjoyable to listen, it has a not really cool frequency. Despite some mixing problems the drums groove hard.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
The voice is not loud enough, we cannot really hear what it says. Melody is pretty nice. Hats are a little bit techno-sounding, not really dubstep. it lacks of sidechain of your instruments and OTT on your chords. Sad the song is not longer.
~ Ahurac
Thanx, man, for review!
I'm chilling to the chords at the beginning ^^. You hats pattern is pretty robotic, is it intended? Your perc introduced at 0:27 is really loud compared to the rest of the song. It's meant to be simple but I believe it lacks of many instruments, like a reese bass, more layers for the chords, transition, fills, etc... Your lead at 2:19 is insanely good tho.
Thx ^-^
I appreciate that.
The instruments are not that bad, but the melody sounds really random, you should fix that. Some instruments like your piano are too much panned, be careful. Cool pattern tho.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
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