Your drums samples sounds a little bit cheap, especially the snare but it's okay. Your guitar is cool, but a slight sidechain would make the track pumpier. The brass at 0:30 is pretty cheap too. The piano at 0:47 feels "alone", the track is a little bit empty with just the piano and the drums. Drums patterns are great tho. The melody at the end sounds a little bit random, be careful with that.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac