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Ahurac

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The lead and the guitar are not in the same key, it makes things really cursed. o_O why are there so much metallic basses at 0:32?
Okay I didn't understand what I've just listened to o_OOO.

I'm chilling to the chords at the beginning ^^. You hats pattern is pretty robotic, is it intended? Your perc introduced at 0:27 is really loud compared to the rest of the song. It's meant to be simple but I believe it lacks of many instruments, like a reese bass, more layers for the chords, transition, fills, etc... Your lead at 2:19 is insanely good tho.

dustyfurniture responds:

Thx ^-^
I appreciate that.

With what software did you do this song?

iVecMan responds:

Eng: With Groovepad. I'm just a mobile user. thanks for the comment! Rus: С помощью Groovepad. Я просто мобильный пользователь. Спасибо за комментарий!

The instruments are not that bad, but the melody sounds really random, you should fix that. Some instruments like your piano are too much panned, be careful. Cool pattern tho.
Wish you the best,

~ Ahurac

ComposerXamtrack responds:

Thank you for your feedback!

Cool melodic stuff, really enjoyable :). Maybe the chords hitting accords the song are a bit harsh and should be turned a little bit down. It lacks of more solid drums too.
Good luck in the future,

~ Ahurac

BlamedGalaxyYT responds:

Thank you very much.. Your message really touched me.. Also good luck as well in the future... Also Thank you so much.. Appreciate it👍

Original melody. I don't really like the drums and they are not loud enough imo. Maybe some sidechain could help them to stand up in the mix. The global idea is not that bad, but it definitely lacks of some more elements.
Wish you the best,

~ Ahurac

The tom is definitely too muck panned to the left, be careful with that. Is this an instrument from Super Mario 64? It sounds like XD. Cool remix tho.

~ Ahurac

JayJayScribbs responds:

Probably. I used the SMG base drumkit because I have no money for any real vsts

The melody is very random, is it the case in the original version?

Redead-ITA responds:

It tries to imitate the original at best, though i should note it is very rough around the edges.
Midi production isn't my forte.

LMAOOOOOOO wtf is this XDDD. You should tune the sample so it doesn't sound wrong when the strings hit at 0:11.

~ Ahurac

Nice melodic stuff, a bit random tho. It lacks of more elements when the drums hit.

~ Ahurac

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