The tom is definitely too muck panned to the left, be careful with that. Is this an instrument from Super Mario 64? It sounds like XD. Cool remix tho.
~ Ahurac
The tom is definitely too muck panned to the left, be careful with that. Is this an instrument from Super Mario 64? It sounds like XD. Cool remix tho.
~ Ahurac
Probably. I used the SMG base drumkit because I have no money for any real vsts
The melody is very random, is it the case in the original version?
It tries to imitate the original at best, though i should note it is very rough around the edges.
Midi production isn't my forte.
Nice kick. Be careful your hat is a bit loud and not stereo enough imo. The melody is really cool but it lacks of sidechain like on the bass on it. The lead is a little bit loud on the drop, and it lacks of some other elements like a bouncy plucky chiptune bass. The lead is playing a damn cool pattern. I def love the bleeps at 1:53.
Keep it up man,
~ Ahurac
I made this 6 years ago (just moving from Soundcloud and uploading the backlog), I'm definitely a lot better now, but it's still great to hear feedback n see what ppl think. Thanks man!
If you are the original author of the song, then you did a cool job, congrats. The song is globally not really well mixed but the rest is very trippy, it has that vibe.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Pretty okay chill track. I believe these are FL stock samples, be careful, they are overused. Also you should not do a buildup with such few elements.
Good luck for the future :),
~ Ahurac
Thanks! I'm practicing so I can make way better songs.
The rhythm of the drums is a bit random, be careful about that. Melodic stuff is pretty nice. Maybe the song is a little repetitive.
Good job anyway, good luck for the future,
~ Ahurac
Ok, next i'll try be more careful to the drum beats and the way my songs are. Thx for the review! Your opinion is important to motivate to do better.
~Alph4
The melodies are really nice, well job. The drums as well are cool. Be careful your song is clipping hard, think about mixing down your tracks. The song is a little bit repetitive and 7:11 is really long, but it's okay.
Well done mate, good luck for the future and if you have questions or feedback to ask, simply hit my DMs I'm open :),
~ Ahurac
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