Some french touch vibes lmao. Nice bwap, sad it's bad quality recording. Also too bad the audio is not longer.
Even if I can't get the point, good job,
~ Ahurac
Some french touch vibes lmao. Nice bwap, sad it's bad quality recording. Also too bad the audio is not longer.
Even if I can't get the point, good job,
~ Ahurac
Really enjoyable audio. I wish there were some low-pass on the ukulele so it fits better the track's lo-fi vibe. Also it lacks of reverb. If you recorded it yourself, then well done, it's amazing.
~ Ahurac
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. And yes, I recorded it myself =)
Nice audio. It could be normalized to reduce the volume difference with other audios. The melody is pretty nice but is pretty random, you should give it some more rhythm. I say that because I can't remember it. A well composed is a melody you can keep in mind, or at least recognize.
Keep it up tho,
~ Ahurac
I'm pretty new to Music on Newgrounds but thank you a lot for your advice. I will try to make the song more on the beat and making it a good rhythm. But yeah thanks so much for the Advice
Really nice. The melodies are cool, the structure as well. You have a unique style that can be improved, so never give up in music man. Your track has some mixing issues, there's a one synth in the drop that is too loud, also I believe it's panned to the left. The basses at 1:52 has some weird phasing that makes them sound not really great, also they are a little bit too loud.
You deserve to be discovered, you have my scout :),
~ Ahurac
Thak you my man :). I am still learning to mix Dubstep (bassliners are never too loud, you know hahaha). Also about the phasing, I made it intentionally, just wanted to experiment the sound to do unpredictable things (the panning problem at that very moment is a random fallout of the phase).
I atually already released some songs previously which can be found in Spotify, but I wanted to upload this one here for Geometry Dash purpouses.
- Outer Kosmos
The synth in the beginning is very harsh, not really harsh. The mixing has some issues. Also the elements are really random. I can't really give any further feedback since I'm not used to this.
~ Ahurac
criticism appreciated! its supposed to be harsh and random because its breakcore but i know its not for everyone
It lacks of some OTT on the piano, I'd say. Nice lead. It lacks of sidechain on the piano, lead and bass. There's some percs panned to the left, they are pretty loud. The drums samples are pretty weak, but I think it's probably because there's no sidechain.
Keep it up tho,
~ Ahurac
There's some wrong notes but it slaps anyway, the pattern is good. The kick you used is pretty weak, I guess it comes with FL Studio, I recommend you to get some samples on the Internet. The song is pretty repetitive, you should make some more variations in the melody at some points.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Thanks for the feedback! i will try to improve with my other songs!
The bass has annoying high frequencies, you should EQ it. It lacks of hi-hats in the drop, and on the other hand I wouldn't do my buildup with pitched hats. Tho the pattern of the bass is not that bad, you should make the sub follow it along.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Thanks for your feedback!
The drums sound damn cool. The electronic bass is buzzy, we cannot hear it really well. The structure is pretty random, you should do something like intro, pre-chorus, chorus, bridge, etc or not something exactly like that but something more coherent I'd say. Although the mixing here is not that bad.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
PS: One last thing, what software do you use?
cubase
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