Nice kick. Be careful your hat is a bit loud and not stereo enough imo. The melody is really cool but it lacks of sidechain like on the bass on it. The lead is a little bit loud on the drop, and it lacks of some other elements like a bouncy plucky chiptune bass. The lead is playing a damn cool pattern. I def love the bleeps at 1:53.
Keep it up man,
~ Ahurac
I made this 6 years ago (just moving from Soundcloud and uploading the backlog), I'm definitely a lot better now, but it's still great to hear feedback n see what ppl think. Thanks man!
It lacks of better drums imo, they are not present enough. Also the structure sounds a bit random.
Good luck in the future :),
~ Ahurac
It's because when I rest sometimes my little brother just deletes some
If you are the original author of the song, then you did a cool job, congrats. The song is globally not really well mixed but the rest is very trippy, it has that vibe.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Pretty okay chill track. I believe these are FL stock samples, be careful, they are overused. Also you should not do a buildup with such few elements.
Good luck for the future :),
~ Ahurac
Thanks! I'm practicing so I can make way better songs.
The rhythm of the drums is a bit random, be careful about that. Melodic stuff is pretty nice. Maybe the song is a little repetitive.
Good job anyway, good luck for the future,
~ Ahurac
Ok, next i'll try be more careful to the drum beats and the way my songs are. Thx for the review! Your opinion is important to motivate to do better.
~Alph4
The melodies are really nice, well job. The drums as well are cool. Be careful your song is clipping hard, think about mixing down your tracks. The song is a little bit repetitive and 7:11 is really long, but it's okay.
Well done mate, good luck for the future and if you have questions or feedback to ask, simply hit my DMs I'm open :),
~ Ahurac
I recommend you not to use FL stock samples, they are overused and pretty bad quality. Also there wayyyyy too much reverb on most of the track, be careful with this effect. The guitar introduced at 0:48 plays wrong notes. The bass on the drop is too loud and has a weird ducking effect which could be improved. Also you track lacks of sub frequencies, like on the kick.
Wish you the best for the future :) keep on producing,
~ Ahurac
what I will take into account thanks for commenting
The gap between 2 bass notes like at 0:06 is a bit weird. The synth playing high pitched notes is pretty loud. Omg I love how things are turning at 0:33 :). At this point of the review I didn't listened to the drop yet. The buildup sounds cool but the sidechain is too heavy. On the drop the bass is cool but the kick is not present enough imo, you should mix down your track and remove that limiter on your master, also the hi-hats are cool but not really appropriate for me, I better imagine typical house offbeat hats.
In the end your song is really cool, good job :),
~ Ahurac
Mixing with only free and stock plugins is hard lol, I'm still learning :)
The ducking on your bass is too heavy. Your progression sounds really cool. The drums and especially the snare sound weird, you should try new samples. Be careful your lead coming at 0:53 is loud af and I believe it makes the track clipping. The chords reminds me of Kirby OST, which is really cool, so well done mate.
Good luck in the future,
~ Ahurac
Can't wait to see the project, it looks exciting! The main theme is really sad actually, is it desired? Also there's a wrong note in the arp coming at 1:17: this is the fourth note hitting in the second chord (the 20th note played by the arp, which is also the 24th, the 28th and the 32nd).
Good luck in the future my lad :),
~ Ahurac
This song was not actually meant to be sad, and it wasn't desired for that either. I tried to give it more of a nostalgic feel using Rhodes piano.
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