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Ahurac

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The drop feels a little bit empty and the bass does not fit really well to the song imo. Also the song lacks of structure. Otherwise, the mix and the melody are pretty great to me.
Keep it up, also I scouted you to the audio portal so you'll get more visibility on Newgrounds,

~ Ahurac

Try to use different instruments for you bass and leads, because otherwise it creates weird waveform blending. The melody is good, it makes me think about Pokémon a lot. The master is over compressed.

Wescraftedguy responds:

thanks for the advice, i'll try to take it into account for future songs

Nice but basic melodies.

ExtremLight responds:

Thanks!!!

The snare slaps af, not fan of the kick tho. It has some mixing problems and more sound design on the bass and lead would be cool. What DAW did you used to make the song?

~ Ahurac

ExubermanRecords responds:

I used this sparsely populated DAW named Caustic 3. BTW forgot to mix before releasing.

The instruments are offsync, it sounds like it's played in real time by a human but not in a proper way. Also it lacks of more instruments and the melody sounds random.
Good luck in the future,

~ Ahurac

Rocketlauncher269 responds:

It was played by a human
I also should try and not make it sound random
thanks for commenting!
also im new to making music

The melody sounds a little bit random. The vibe is nice tho. Some parts are it long like the one from 1:03 to 1:48.

~ Ahurac

The piano sounds very cool. The drums are not emphasized enough imo, especially the kick. The acid bass doesn't fit really well to the vibe of the song, but it could have been fixed with a different pattern maybe. The lead introduced at 0:28 has some compression problems, it sounds like you applied 20 OTTs on it XD. the rhodes at 0:45 are a little bit loud and at this point the song is a little bit overwhelmed: there's too many elements in it. The structure could me more coherent, with intro / buildup / drop. Sad the song is not longer.
Keep it up, if you want more advice on music production, don't hesitate to hit my DMs,

~ Ahurac

The beat is leat af, well done man. The drums and the 808 are a little bit too loud compared to the rest, and the 808 seems to be stereo, which is really disturbing. Sad the song is not longer. I can scout you but I first would like to discuss about your producer experience via DM, what do you say about that :)?
Hit my messages if you want, and I wish you the best,

~ Ahurac

What about adding some more instruments XD

The 808 is a little bit too high pitched, I mean it's not as heavy as expected. The melody is really nice and fit well to the beat, the drums are cool. It's a little bit basic but why not.
Wish you the best,

~ Ahurac

zzile responds:

Thanks for criticism!

I accidentally moved the drum pattern mid song, that's me not listening right. I also do hear the 808 being loud and high, that's poor sound choice I believe. Thanks again for listening!

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