The reese is damn loud. The melody is pretty random. I advise you to use better samples for the drums. It lacks of sidechain. You can use risers to make a better buildup. The drop basses are a bit loud and weird, don't hesitate to practice sound design to get better, I think you got potential.
Keep making music, that's important :) and wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
yeah now that i look back on it this track kinda sucks
thanks for the feedback
Vital :DDD best synth. The melodies are really cool. The arp sounds sick, the whole track is really inspiring :0. Your master clips a bit on the drop, you should fix that. The chords are monotonous, some variation in the texture would be cool. The drop melody sounds pretty random, like not easy to remember.
Otherwise that's a great track, well done and keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Fair enough! Appreciate the feedback!
Sick melodies. Although they are pretty good, you should use even better sound libraries to make it more real (since it's expensive I can understand you keep working like this which is really fine yet). There are some mixing issues (nothing terrible, let me explain): the piano seems to be a little bit too loud, the bass too but you can boost the subs on it to keep the energy. I think the drums could be louder too. I don't have anything else to say, except some elements could be quantized in a better way to keep it well synced, but damn, what a good audio.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
Hey there! Thank you for the positive feedback :)
About the mixing in piano and bass, i really wanted them to stand out, so I had to sacrifice some of the drums (but maybe I did oerdo a bit, yeah). And the libraries... yeah, im currently keeping an eye on Kontakt sales, but for now I keep on using some free unes (which, somehow, I like more for this song because they kind of don't sound that realistic).
Overall, i'm very glad you like it. ^^
Best regards,
Outer Kosmos
Reminds me of 'Come Together' by the Beatles. The instrument at 0:19 is pretty loud and robotic, I would have used another one, but it plays a cool melody imo. I one day I hear this in the main menu of a game, then it's instantly a cool game :D.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
Thanks mate, that instrument is a muted trumpet. Glad you enjoyed the track, would love to hear it used in something :)
It lacks of some lows in the drums, it feels like a compressor is pulling out the highs. I must say I'm impressed by the quality of the composition and of the recording, that a very enjoyable audio. Maybe the melodic instruments at 0:44 are a bit too loud (not the guitar but the orchestral elements).
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Maybe!, thank you so much!
Underrated. This melody is pretty cool. I checked some of your other audios and I think you should normalize the sound so it's louder and listeners aren't forced to turn up their volume to listen to the song. Some variation would be cool. Why not adding some chill drums in your next songs?
Keep it up really, best thing I heard today,
~ Ahurac
k thanks :D
Actually not that bad. I recommend you to use better sample libraries to make your brasses, Spitfire LABS got some good ones to get a professional sound. The groove and arragement are really nice. Why not turning this into a full song?
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
thanks. im relatively new to making anything, really. criticism like this will help me progress as an "artist(?)". Not turning it into a full song cause it's just something I did on the side as a small project.
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