Ahurac's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oak EP - Full EP]

Nice tracks bro.

Safariminer responds:

Thanks!

[ΔΔΔ Fly High ΔΔΔ]

RIP 八o
Nice tribute, cool melodies, I'd just say the impacts don't have enough sub frequencies to be as deep as they could be.

y-Twokoop responds:

thx for the feedback!

[Condensate (old bad version) -Galvanite]

The drums samples are pretty cheap, then sound like the LMMS of FL stock ones, you can find better ones on the Internet. The melody is pretty simple, I advise you to give it more rhythm. EDIT: I like it better from 0:54. It lacks of bass imo. It also lacks of sidechain on everything that is not the drums. The structure is pretty random, I mean it's there but it could be more distinguished.
Keep it up, I hope this feedback was not too rude and actually helped,

~ Ahurac

galvanite responds:

Thank you, I'll work on fixing these sorts of things for my future tracks. Edit: And yes, this level of critique is very much welcome. Its certainly one of the best ways I'll be able to improve.

[【Hardcore, Dubstep, Metal】ZUN - Smoking Dragon(BegissoR's Remix)]

Nice track. You bass seems to overwhelm the whole track. But the drums and the sidechain are good so why not. I'm not good at making dubstep basses, but I listen to bass music really often and I think your basses are pretty weak. The hats could have more variation. Nice guitar tho.

~ Ahurac

begissor responds:

Making basses are so hard, still didn't learn properly after so long time

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[i promise i care]

Really enjoyable audio. I wish there were some low-pass on the ukulele so it fits better the track's lo-fi vibe. Also it lacks of reverb. If you recorded it yourself, then well done, it's amazing.

~ Ahurac

MissingEdge responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. And yes, I recorded it myself =)

[ninja 赤インク]

Nice audio. It could be normalized to reduce the volume difference with other audios. The melody is pretty nice but is pretty random, you should give it some more rhythm. I say that because I can't remember it. A well composed is a melody you can keep in mind, or at least recognize.
Keep it up tho,

~ Ahurac

HAL0GUY responds:

I'm pretty new to Music on Newgrounds but thank you a lot for your advice. I will try to make the song more on the beat and making it a good rhythm. But yeah thanks so much for the Advice

[Outer Kosmos - Supernova]

Really nice. The melodies are cool, the structure as well. You have a unique style that can be improved, so never give up in music man. Your track has some mixing issues, there's a one synth in the drop that is too loud, also I believe it's panned to the left. The basses at 1:52 has some weird phasing that makes them sound not really great, also they are a little bit too loud.
You deserve to be discovered, you have my scout :),

~ Ahurac

OuterKosmos responds:

Thak you my man :). I am still learning to mix Dubstep (bassliners are never too loud, you know hahaha). Also about the phasing, I made it intentionally, just wanted to experiment the sound to do unpredictable things (the panning problem at that very moment is a random fallout of the phase).
I atually already released some songs previously which can be found in Spotify, but I wanted to upload this one here for Geometry Dash purpouses.

- Outer Kosmos

[just me tryna to make breakcore]

The synth in the beginning is very harsh, not really harsh. The mixing has some issues. Also the elements are really random. I can't really give any further feedback since I'm not used to this.

~ Ahurac

marsy99 responds:

criticism appreciated! its supposed to be harsh and random because its breakcore but i know its not for everyone