Ahurac's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[GavHern - Wisp]

Cool song! I have some feedback to help you to improve your production skills.
First of all, you got nice melodic stuff, keep it up. In your intro, your chords are too loud and it makes your master overcompress. You kick has no sub and it's a bit weird. And your sub itself could be more present. Cool buildup. There's a huge lack of bass in your drop, the best way to remove it is to add a big fat reese (multiple layers for better results). You should add hi-hats in the drop too.
That's pretty much all I can say, I hope it helped.
Don't hesitate to send me your future songs via DM, and btw I scouted you to the audio portal, now you're part of approved artists on Newgrounds.
I saw your website, so you're a Virtual Riot fan uh? We're gonna be friends XD

GavHern responds:

I really appreciate the feedback! This is a bit of an older track, I just realized I never shared it on Newgrounds. These are things I'm working on for stuff that I make in the future! I'd consider myself fairly new to production so I really appreciate you pointing these things out!

Also, thanks for the scout that's awesome!

[Trap Full]

You hats could be more appropriate to Trap, and sometimes they are too loud. The choice of acoustic drums samples is interesting. There's a wrong note at 0:50. Your buildup needs risers and tension lifter at 1:17.
I wish you the best!

Er0kez responds:

Thanks! And also i dont use any samples:p

[Sin4h - Gameland]

The melody is so cool! It makes me think about Tokyo Machine a lot! Oof I wasn't ready for the "HEEEEEERE WE GOOOOO!" at 0:27 o_O. The kick is a bit too heavy for the genre imo. You got nice textures here, arps, glitchs, blips and sfx are really well placed in the song. Your hats are too much panned to the left for me, but it's a detail.
In the end, well job, I mean, really well job, the only problem is the kick for me but your song was very interesting.

Sin4h responds:

Thx for your tips

[Realistic]

Chords at the beginning sound really random. Be careful, it clips sometimes. There is some interesting melodic stuff in the drop tho.

ItzBGZRound responds:

i had tried to make a melody but i was in a hurry to make the drop, so i was still like that. ¯ \ _ (ツ) _ / ¯

[DrayPlay - Bright Melody (Lost Proyect)]

Watch out when your buildup comes in, there no transition and this is brutal o_O. The melody and chords are kinda cool, don't forget to take down this limiter on the master, it breaks down the song.
EDIT: Send me your next projects! I can't wait to give you feedbacks and maybe scout you to the portal :)

Dr4yPl4y responds:

Bro, I already released two new projects

[Star Adventure]

There's some good ideas here. It lacks of sub frequencies, try to turn up your sub. Don't hesitate to use FX as sweeps or downlifter more often.

Pace-Falm responds:

Ok, thx man)

[It's A False Equivalency, and Quit Your Job]

I'm not a huge fan of your style, but as an artist you deserve to figure on the audio portal, so I scouted you :) have a nice day

emseeemotion responds:

Thanks for the honesty and the scouting!!

[Credits or Other]

I like the melody and the progression. Be careful your drums are not loud enough imo and your lead is maybe a little bit loud.

BFAPOP responds:

it's just a track for an animated series like bfdi. but I will try to do better (and this is a Russian project) ^-^

[Spark Moment]

The sidechain is a little bit harsh, try to sync it a little bit better so it doesn't produce a sort of click. Anyway the melody and the progression are pretty cool.

DrTKR responds:

Thank you very much for your comment, I will consider your advice for my next project :D

[Water Song]

Very pleasant melodic content. I think it needs EQ at some times because of the high frequencies. Keep up! Btw what do you use to make songs?

mouthambience responds:

I made these a long time ago. I just decided to upload them to NG because idk what else to do in this quarantine. I use fl studio now, so I probably used an older one while making these. If you wanna see the rest of my songs, check out my soundcloud. If you wanna see what I do now, check out "Cool 3d World." Thanks for the feedback either way!