I love the intro! On the other hand, there's huge mixing problems in the drop... I mean, we can barely hear other instruments than drums, the kick has no sub, and plenty of other things.
I wish you the best for future,
~ Ahurac
I love the intro! On the other hand, there's huge mixing problems in the drop... I mean, we can barely hear other instruments than drums, the kick has no sub, and plenty of other things.
I wish you the best for future,
~ Ahurac
I see, thanks. I'll fix that (Done.)
The arp is really cool in this one. I think the piano is a bit loud contrary to the drums imo. It's not a problem if you're inexperienced with drums, just keep it simple with kick and snare, add hi-hats and make the pattern coherent with your composition, then you can add fills but it's not an absolute necessity. Be careful btw your hats in the song you sent me are really loud, it cuts the mix. If you want quality drums samples, I recommend you to get KSHMR 3 sample packs, they are focused on EDM but there's a lot of insanely good drums samples included, I highly recommend you to check out. I really love the instrument you introduced at 7:12, it vibes is really cool. Be careful, mostly when your piano hits, the song clipping, to avoid this, you need to mix your tracks at lower volumes, you'll see how good it does.
Thank you for the constructive criticism. Its nice to have someone actually listen to this! Also that instrument is a xylophone that is a ''default'' instrument on Online Sequencer, with added reverb and delay. Thank you for your wisdom regarding the piano; I have noticed it before but couldn't fix it. Thank you!
You drums samples aren't really good imo. On the other hand I love the little arp. You should sidechain the piano and some other elements because it sounds too much present compared to the other instruments.
Good job anyway, wish you the best for future.
~ Ahurac
Thanks for your feedback. I'm waiting to get better software; right now, I use online sequencer, a piano-roll type software. Thank you for actually commenting on my song :D
Sounds like riddim drums XD but why are there random notes on top of them?
This is my newest song, i didnt know what to put in it
Usually I don't like to do backseat modding, but I wouldn't ask for scouting if I was you. Also you need to be approved by RopTop if you want your songs to be used in Geometry Dash.
Hi, I search on discord but RobTop not enable the message for “ unknown people " (on discord)
Pretty nice. I feel like some notes played by the bass and the arp at 0:58 are wrong.
Thx you for listening! And thx you for feedback
The pan scared me at the beginning o_O. The percussions at 0:27 are a bit loud and dry. The chords are ok. I pretty liked the melody at 1:22. Be careful the chords at 1:35 are wrong. Why is there another song at the end XD
The chords at the end is the outro,thank you for the feedback !
So random o_O
What did you mean? By the way,the track is quite old,you can listen to my other tracks!
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