The snare slaps af, not fan of the kick tho. It has some mixing problems and more sound design on the bass and lead would be cool. What DAW did you used to make the song?
~ Ahurac
The snare slaps af, not fan of the kick tho. It has some mixing problems and more sound design on the bass and lead would be cool. What DAW did you used to make the song?
~ Ahurac
I used this sparsely populated DAW named Caustic 3. BTW forgot to mix before releasing.
The instruments are offsync, it sounds like it's played in real time by a human but not in a proper way. Also it lacks of more instruments and the melody sounds random.
Good luck in the future,
~ Ahurac
It was played by a human
I also should try and not make it sound random
thanks for commenting!
also im new to making music
The 808 is a little bit too high pitched, I mean it's not as heavy as expected. The melody is really nice and fit well to the beat, the drums are cool. It's a little bit basic but why not.
Wish you the best,
~ Ahurac
Thanks for criticism!
I accidentally moved the drum pattern mid song, that's me not listening right. I also do hear the 808 being loud and high, that's poor sound choice I believe. Thanks again for listening!
Your drums samples sounds a little bit cheap, especially the snare but it's okay. Your guitar is cool, but a slight sidechain would make the track pumpier. The brass at 0:30 is pretty cheap too. The piano at 0:47 feels "alone", the track is a little bit empty with just the piano and the drums. Drums patterns are great tho. The melody at the end sounds a little bit random, be careful with that.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Wdym by, "Cheap"?
Oh god I finally found something good among the undiscovered artists. You deserve my scout man.
Here's a feedback.
You drop lacks of sub bass. The trance bass which plays plucky notes is not loud enough imo. Maybe the hats could be richer. Love the arps <3.
Keep on producing lad,
~ Ahurac
Thanks, it means a lot :)
It lacks of sidechain when the kick hits. Also the drums sounds like they come from a House Music song, not really dubstep.
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
the skiddy bop dop dee tunes
The melody is not really coherent. It lacks of sidechain. The rhythm is groovy tho. The drums are a little bit tho. You should switch to a real DAW, GarageBand is limited in features.
~ Ahurac
Hello, thank you for your feedback. I can't go to FL Studio as I don't have the option to fix my broken laptop. As everything will be, so I will say. In the meantime, I'll be making tracks in GarageBand on my iPad. I'm a beginner and I don't know much about electronic music yet. So if I have any problems, then feel free to comment. I will correct myself.
Lost Bits is out now!
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