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You should put a kick on all 4 beats. Your chords sounds a bit weird sometimes. Try to layer your bass to make it deeper. That's all for me, wish you the best for the future!

You bass is a bit loud but I have nothing else to say.

Cool song! I have some feedback to help you to improve your production skills.
First of all, you got nice melodic stuff, keep it up. In your intro, your chords are too loud and it makes your master overcompress. You kick has no sub and it's a bit weird. And your sub itself could be more present. Cool buildup. There's a huge lack of bass in your drop, the best way to remove it is to add a big fat reese (multiple layers for better results). You should add hi-hats in the drop too.
That's pretty much all I can say, I hope it helped.
Don't hesitate to send me your future songs via DM, and btw I scouted you to the audio portal, now you're part of approved artists on Newgrounds.
I saw your website, so you're a Virtual Riot fan uh? We're gonna be friends XD

GavHern responds:

I really appreciate the feedback! This is a bit of an older track, I just realized I never shared it on Newgrounds. These are things I'm working on for stuff that I make in the future! I'd consider myself fairly new to production so I really appreciate you pointing these things out!

Also, thanks for the scout that's awesome!

You buildup kick has a weird rumble, maybe you can fix it with an EQ. The lead at 0:14 is a bit loud. Your sidechain seems to be too long and not enough powerful imo.

Some synths are a bit weird and it seems that the master is overcompressed. Maybe the song is a bit repetitive but that's all.

You hats could be more appropriate to Trap, and sometimes they are too loud. The choice of acoustic drums samples is interesting. There's a wrong note at 0:50. Your buildup needs risers and tension lifter at 1:17.
I wish you the best!

Er0kez responds:

Thanks! And also i dont use any samples:p

The rhythm is feeling a bit random, I think you should review the melody.

You hats loop is too loud at 0:22. Pretty good tho.

Amazing NCS vibe, sad that the audio quality is so low. Reminds me of Alan Walker's 'Force', I think you took it for inspiration, and it's well executed. This deserves a 5 star for me. Hit my DMs when you release more songs, I'll scout you to the audio portal :)

Good chords. Be careful, your hats are too loud, and the pattern could be more appropriate to the song. Nice vocals! Composition part remind me of Sonic, and it makes the song so cool to me... There's some problems of mixing in the drop, the snare is a bit loud, and vocals are not loud enough, but the rest is pretty good.
Well done man.

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