The synth in the beginning sound a bit cheap but it creates a cool ambiance. I like the arp but it seems like it's unsynced from the kick. Btw the kick is pretty weak, it could hit harder.
Keep it up tho,
~ Ahurac
The synth in the beginning sound a bit cheap but it creates a cool ambiance. I like the arp but it seems like it's unsynced from the kick. Btw the kick is pretty weak, it could hit harder.
Keep it up tho,
~ Ahurac
Thank you that at least someone is listening to me! Respect you
Nice ambiance. I love the drums and the bass design. They both sound really professional but at the same time the pattern played by the bass feels a bit random to me in contrast. Same for the melody: nice but random (less than the bass tho). For the second drop the basses are really weird and lack of power I'd say.
Nice job, keep it up and feel free to send me your future creation via DMs;
~ Ahurac
Thank you for your feedback. I will keep these things in mind and see how I can apply these tips in my future releases.
The remix is super well made. I have some feedback tho. I'd say the kick could be more hearable but the rest of the drums are really professional and cool. There's many stuff going on and it seems like they all fight for the same frequency range, which is not really good for the mix but that's okay imo. The audio is a bit short, a 3 min version of this would be cool!
Good luck in the future, keep it up ^^,
~ Ahurac
Thanks so much for the advice, I'll try to keep this in mind for my future remixes. I might make an extended version and patch up the kick for now.
The drums samples are pretty cheap and it needs sidechain especially for the kick. The snare and the hats are damn loud. At 1:13 the rawstyle kick come from nowhere, is really loud and totally breaks the song, I can't really understand the context.
Keep it up anyway,
~ Ahurac
The recording could be better but the song is pretty well mixed so it doesn't matter. Maybe the guitars fight a little bit with the vocals tho. As a true musician, you deserve scout :).
Keep it up,
~ Ahurac
Thank you so much for your response! This track will be re-mastered in a future release I have in the works so when that's out, you'll see this track in its full glory alongside a bunch of others.
The bass sound good but it's melody is pretty random. The lead also plays random melodies. It lacks of solid drums but it slaps otherwise.
~ Ahurac
I got it
The drums samples are really cheap, you should bet better ones, I can give you advice if you want. The melody is pretty cool.
Nice work,
~ Ahurac
Thanks for the critique. I'd actually synthesised the drums myself and was going for a more retro-ish lo-fi feel with their sound.
I'd appreciate your advice immensely if you have the time :)
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