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Ahurac

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The chords are a bit random. The brass is cool but also plays kinda random notes. You should try to make several instruments play at the same time, it can be interesting.
EDIT: Oops I just saw your "even it is random", I think it's kinda weird but if it's intended and you're happy with that then that's just fine XD.

~ Ahurac

UTOPIA39mc responds:

Thanks for the Feedback :3 My other music is better, but I will try to let instruments play at the same time. Thanks again :D

It sounds like you got rid of a precise frequency on the master itself. The melody is pretty good. The hats pattern doesn't sound really good. You drums samples are great. It lacks of sidechain. It also lacks of a solid structure (like intro - buildup - drop).
Keep it up,

~ Ahurac

The instruments are a bit cheap but I'll assume it's intended. Sounds like cute 16-bit music, i love that. You have a very great music theory btw, your melodies are damn cool.
I wish you the best,

~ Ahurac

Sounds fun and cool. The drums could be more hearable. The non-drums instruments should have some sidechain to make the drums stand out. This is a good song for a puzzle game or something like that, would love to hear it in any game! The theme is pretty repetitive but there's variations at some points so it's okay.
To conclude: I think the main problem of this audio is mixing, because it's great in terms of composition and okay in terms of structure. Keep it up!

~ Ahurac

My god what is it o_O

The instruments are a bit cheap. Some parts sound cacophonous, you should be careful with that. The theme is really catchy. Sad the second part has no variation from the first one.

~ Ahurac

LandofHeros2234 responds:

Could you tell me exactly where it is hard to listen to, I need to know if I want to improve

Why weren't you scouted bruh... I did it, have a good day :)

~ Ahurac

theRUD responds:

Thank you <3

The lead is kinda dry, some effect would be cool. The melody is pretty nice, but the song is extremely repetitive. The bass seems to be offsynced. The drums are cool but I don't like the snare.
Keep it up,

~ Ahurac

X-500 responds:

If you want i can improve it. Thank you very much listen to me more often!

Did you write the MIDI yourself? Because it's pretty accurate, well done if you did.

~ Ahurac

Misty-Starling09 responds:

Yeah, I wrote the midi myself. I tried my best to make it a little accurate to the original despite my small efforts. I don't like sharing my Midi's because I'm a little personal. Making MIDI's in FL-Studio is a pain in the bum

It lacks of more notes, but the ambiance created is well done. Would be even nicer with subtle cinematic percussion.

~ Ahurac

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