Ahurac's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[BeRary]

Pretty nice. I feel like some notes played by the bass and the arp at 0:58 are wrong.

JokoKroko responds:

Thx you for listening! And thx you for feedback

[Sad day]

The pan scared me at the beginning o_O. The percussions at 0:27 are a bit loud and dry. The chords are ok. I pretty liked the melody at 1:22. Be careful the chords at 1:35 are wrong. Why is there another song at the end XD

unamedcreator responds:

The chords at the end is the outro,thank you for the feedback !

[*{flash}*]

So random o_O

X-500 responds:

What did you mean? By the way,the track is quite old,you can listen to my other tracks!

[sigh]

You should put a kick on all 4 beats. Your chords sounds a bit weird sometimes. Try to layer your bass to make it deeper. That's all for me, wish you the best for the future!

[GavHern - Wisp]

Cool song! I have some feedback to help you to improve your production skills.
First of all, you got nice melodic stuff, keep it up. In your intro, your chords are too loud and it makes your master overcompress. You kick has no sub and it's a bit weird. And your sub itself could be more present. Cool buildup. There's a huge lack of bass in your drop, the best way to remove it is to add a big fat reese (multiple layers for better results). You should add hi-hats in the drop too.
That's pretty much all I can say, I hope it helped.
Don't hesitate to send me your future songs via DM, and btw I scouted you to the audio portal, now you're part of approved artists on Newgrounds.
I saw your website, so you're a Virtual Riot fan uh? We're gonna be friends XD

GavHern responds:

I really appreciate the feedback! This is a bit of an older track, I just realized I never shared it on Newgrounds. These are things I'm working on for stuff that I make in the future! I'd consider myself fairly new to production so I really appreciate you pointing these things out!

Also, thanks for the scout that's awesome!